zondag 4 maart 2012

I.O.F Chapter 2: The first day of figthing

Reaver walked through the grass, watching the island with curiosity and the man was wondering how he could use such an island to the most provitable advantage. He had come here because a strange fellow. The man had showed up in his mansion one night and promised the hero eternal life and a whole island but Reaver was suprised to hear that he first needed to kill all the other people on the island before he would get these prizes. This was no problem for Reaver and the question was not if he would win but rather when he would win.
He had his empire run and if he would stay away too long, those filthy peasants would stop working and the factories of Reaver would lose money. What's more, Reaver needed to be home in time to make another offering to the shadow court. If he failed, all this would be for nothing.
Pushing those thoughts out of his mind, Reaver walked on to make himself ready for his first battle and first kill in this tournament.

Suddenly, Reaver saw a small but fat boy walking past him. The boy was the fattest child Reaver had ever seen, considering that the children in his factory's were very skinny. The boy would be useless to Reaver but it would be a fine first and easy kill in this tournament. 'Hey fatty.'  Reaver spoke with a crual smile. His favorite dragonstomper was still in its holster but the hands of Reaver were close to his gun. The boy turned around and became very angry. "I am not fat. I am bigboned, you balllicker.' After the curseword had been spoken, a electrical power flew towards the hero of skill and hit him in the chest.
Reaver flew backwards, suprised with the power of the boy. 'You are going to die, you piece of shit.' Eric Cartman spoke, his voice full of hatred. With the second curse, another bolt of electricity flew towards Reaver who was just able to dodge the second attack. Not taking any risks, Reaver pulled his dragonstomper and fired four bullets at the boy. Two of the bullets rammed themselfs into the chest of Cartman while the others found themselfs into his head. The boy flew down on the ground but he was dead before he touched the grass.
'You are very fat my good boy' Reaver spoke with a cheery voice before he walked away from Eric Cartman.

The man from Albion walked further through the grass and into a small forest. He was walking for hours now but had not seen anybody since he had killed the boy. This was getting very boring and if Reaver would not see someone soon, he would call it a day and camp out.
Shortly before Reaver wanted to stop wandering, he saw a small light emanating from further in the woods. Hoping that he finally found his opponent, Reaver raced towards the source of the light and when he arrived at a open spot, the light was gone. In its stead, a small green creature stood near a cliff. The creature looked like a hobbe but Reaver had never seen a green one and this one was dressed completely differently. He could see that the creature had its eyes closed and his hands with open palms in the direction of the cliff.
Suddenly, a wall of light appeared on the cliff and the small hobbe kept his eyes closed while he took a object. A blade of light sprung out of the object and the green warrior thrusted his lightsword into the wall.
Reaver was not completely shure on what this small warrior hoped to accomplice but it was certainly not the shock of energy that hit him and stunned the small green warrior for a second.
This tournament was even more easy then Reaver suspected. This warrior would go down with ease also and then two warriors were taken out with only nine to follow. The amazing gunman took his dragonstomper out of the holster and fired a bullet at the head of the green warrior.

After he had been allowed to leave the arena, Yoda had been walking towards a forest. He hoped that he could find a way out of the island before the other warriors would find him. Yoda knew that he was very strong in the force and that he could take out a lot of them but he was sick and tired of the fighting and did not want kill anymore.
He was lured on the island with the promise of a land without war and without the empire. A land where he would find more jedi and could start the order over again. Now he knew that clones were serving this strange man, he knew that the emperor was active here and that meant that the old jedi master was not safe.
After entering the forest, Yoda had come to the cliff and when he tried to dive off, he found himself unable to do so. A invisible barrier was stopping Yoda and when he touched it with the force, it became visible. The barrier was set up around the whole island to prevent anyone from escaping it. Yoda did not know what kind of barrier it was but he was unable to destroy it with the force and and when he used his lightsaber, a shock of energy hit him.
His last try had failed also when Yoda tried to weaken the barrier with the force and attack with a powerfull lightsaber attack. The barrier held and the only result was another shock of energy that hit Yoda.
Before Yoda could try again, the force told him that someone was attacking him. With a speed that suprised anyone, Yoda blocked the bullet, which melted in the heat of the saber. Yoda saw the suprise on the face of his opponent and before the opponent could recover, Yoda pushed him away with the force.

Reaver fell on the ground and he stood up quickly. Neverbefore had he seen that someone was as quick as he was. This opponent was truely dangerous. Reaver fired another few bullets but all of them got blocked by  the lightsaber of Yoda. The small green muppet then used the force to pull the pistol away from Reaver.
Reaver drew his sword and ran towards his opponent, wanting to have a battle of swords. When the two were close enough for a swordfight, Reaver attacked. A first attack of Reaver was high and Yoda ducked under it easily. A second attack was much lower but Yoda jumped over it and the sword missed. As the small jedi came down on the ground again, Reaver tried to stab his opponent. Yoda blocked the attack and as the two swords touched, the inquisitor of Reaver was cleaved in half. Before he could even stand amazed by this turn of events, Yoda pushed Reaver away with the force.
Reaver had never fought such a strange opponent before as he saw how the small green warrior stopped the light emanating from the device. Reaver had one final chance of winning this fight and he drew a second dragonstomper from his boot. He fired the weapon quickly but his opponent had the blade of the light out in a second and the attack got blocked.
Yoda responsed quickly and lifted a rock from the ground. The rock then soared through the air and hit Reaver in the stumach. Reaver collapsed on the ground while he dropped his revolver. The pain was extreme and while he tried to stand up, the former pirate could not help but puke.
Now the green demon was next to him, Reaver knew that there was only one way to save his life.
'Please, have mercy on me.' He spoke. 'I was forced to fight you. They said that I would suffer a horrible fate if I would not...' Reaver added. The Albion warrior spoke some more, all to save his skin.
Yoda watched the begging warrior and altough he should slay this human, he did not want any living creature to suffer anymore. in the end, he spoke the decisive words: 'Very well. Life, you shall but be gone you must.' Reaver picked up his second dragonstomper from the ground quickly and started to run. He left his other gun and broken sword behind, hoping to get away as far as possible.

Somewhere else on the island, a man was watching a screen. Angst had activated all the hidden camera's on the island and when he was browsing them to find the warriors, he came across that strange clown that somehow had found himself on the island.
Angst took his mace out and watched it to see which hopes and dreams appeared on it. To his suprise, none came. Once, a slight image of a bat appeared but it dissolved soon and never returned.
When Angst tried to reach into the fear to see what scared this man, he saw to his great suprise that this innocent looking clown had no fear.
Soon after, a clone captain walked up to behind Angst and started speaking. 'Sir. We found out who this intruder is.' 'Very well, speak on.' Angst answered. After this, the captain continued. 'The name of this man is the Joker and he is the nemisis of Batman. He must have traveled here through the same rift as Batman did. However, it seems that most of the stuff the Joker does makes no sense whatever and one day he can kill a classroom of children and the second day, he is just a innocent clown. He just does not make any sense.'
'Well, that is plausible.' Angst spoke in a soft voice. It made sense with everything Angst had seen so far with this strange clown. 'Very well.' was all Angst said. 'Do you wish us to remove this clown from the tournament?' The clone asked. 'No' Angst said. 'Let us see what this clown can do.'

4 opmerkingen:

  1. Lol poor Eric Cartmen, it turns out he is just a side show for the main bout.

    The battle with Yoda and Reaver was pretty epic, but as you demonstrated Reaver had no chance, everything he had was outclassed by one of the greatest Jedi of all time. Yoda was in character in letting him win, but he'll probably regret it later on.

    And yes, the Joker will indeed show you what he can do

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  2. Really good work man :D I'm loving it.

    I loved when Reaver killed Cartman, that kids' voice is so annoying. and loved how reaver made fun of his weight :D

    And then he takes Yoda, luckily Yoda was feeling merciful ;) Never bring a sword to a lightsabre fight. that sure gave reaver a shock :D Someone who's better than him.

    great fight, awesome fight coreography and I can't wait to see what the Joker does :D

    Love how Angst is all on the security cameras, watching everything. :D Beaeutiful.

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  3. Poor Cartman, he never stood a chance.

    I really liked how you portrayed Yoda; although he could probably beat most people in this tournament with ease, he really doesn't like killing, although a doubt Reaver will pay him back for that mercy later.

    Overall great chapter man, and I liked how the Joker is still just confusing everyone, even Angst;)

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  4. @monopolyman
    thanks. cartman got what he deserved. Even is he would not have killed by Reaver, he would have been hurt a lot by others he would try to attack. Think his clawattacks on azula....
    Reaver is the one person who would kill a child without hesistation and without mercy. Reaver also did not have a chance against Yoda and only his slick talking in combination with yoda's kindness saved him.

    @ Master: Thank you. Cartman can indeed be annoying some times. He also is fat and very sensitive about it. Could not miss the oppertunity. Thanks for the compliment of the fight. I try to choreograph it in a way that someone else could possibly act out the fight. I do the same thing when I create the fight. Every move has to make sense for me.
    As for Angst. Well he needs to know when warriors are dead and where they are. Why he needs to know that, you will read soon.
    Really looking forward to your epic Mickey versys peter griffin match.

    @ Mongol: Thanks buddy. It is always hard to portray existing figures because they have bounderies you cannot cross. Its good to hear that I have ketp yoda as realistic as possible. Mercy will bite you if you dont watch out and Yoda may have made a fatal flaw.

    Also, please poke me if I have not written my opinnion on who is gonna win between Jesse James and al capone on sunday. Might forget it but i want to do

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